Editing our ideas before Story boarding

After thinking about our ideas again before drawing up our story boards, we decided that we would not use the idea of Ben being the policeman looking through the pictures but only use the two girls. We decided to do this because after watching our thriller opening sequence, we discovered that not all of the main characters are introduced in the first two minutes but most of the credits and some action is shown. We also thought that it would be more effective if we only used the dark scenes at the beginning rather than keep switching to light and day because it would make it more spooky and it would make it easier for the audience to understand what was happening. Our sequence would obviously be shorted after cutting out Ben's parts so we decided to include more shots of the girls and we are also going to use a picture of the girls that will be edited on photo shop as the very last thing you will see in the two minute clip. This last image will also include the title "The Sin".