Evaluating Past Students

They have managed to meet the marking criteria of:
Holding a shot steady
Shooting material appropriate to the task set, e.g. the dark settings and more mature objects and themes used such a blood and weapons.
Selecting mise-en-scene e.g. dark settings, thriller make up used (blood), dark soundtrack.
Using varied shot transitions/effects, e.g. the hand written titles that go in and out of focus so it looks like they're shaking.
Using sound with images e.g. the broken sound used every time the titles are used without action.
Using titles appropriately e.g. the shaking titles are used either on a complete black background or over not so important action.
Framing a shot, excluding or including as appropriate e.g. the close ups of blood, weapons and photographs.

All of these help make this video sucessful at attracting the audience and portraying the thriller genre, if i was to improve this video i would use a larger variety of shots which would help them achieve more of the marking criteria.